tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post5109538769314190363..comments2023-09-12T10:19:46.166-04:00Comments on Christina Lee: First Words WorkshopChristina Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-62466888703145512622011-05-28T13:58:18.463-04:002011-05-28T13:58:18.463-04:00This is a great post! Looking forward to reading ...This is a great post! Looking forward to reading more from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-78772358017833589052011-05-26T13:32:10.974-04:002011-05-26T13:32:10.974-04:00Lourie, I'm waiting.... *taps foot*
:-)Lourie, I'm waiting.... *taps foot*<br /><br />:-)Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-9795924810385178772011-05-26T12:34:46.497-04:002011-05-26T12:34:46.497-04:00Wow! I have been thinking about doing this...and ...Wow! I have been thinking about doing this...and forgetting and remembering. Def going to shoot you an email now.Louriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05477223472789865063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-28518576727381501652011-05-26T06:29:15.628-04:002011-05-26T06:29:15.628-04:00Good start, but the comments helped you bring it t...Good start, but the comments helped you bring it to life. So much better! Excellent.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-5089362985979616502011-05-26T05:54:34.907-04:002011-05-26T05:54:34.907-04:00This is such a great idea. And I love the way you ...This is such a great idea. And I love the way you reworded it. It makes a huge difference. That showing and not telling thing. ;)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-4483347786481186822011-05-25T21:53:38.099-04:002011-05-25T21:53:38.099-04:00This is an interesting idea. I like that your sni...This is an interesting idea. I like that your snippets are small...it's nice for those of us without a lot of computer time to still get the gist.<br /><br />Very thought provoking.<br /><br />Shelleystoryqueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039684494823420722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-91425455151470868462011-05-25T12:32:53.102-04:002011-05-25T12:32:53.102-04:00I really liked your advice & the details added...I really liked your advice & the details added. :)Emy Shinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109925009902220083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-15910360390904276402011-05-25T09:22:45.273-04:002011-05-25T09:22:45.273-04:00Excellent advice, ladies! I'm glad I didn'...Excellent advice, ladies! I'm glad I didn't miss this.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-2029016386971622992011-05-25T08:53:33.873-04:002011-05-25T08:53:33.873-04:00BTW: Problems with Blogger today? Unclick 'kee...BTW: Problems with Blogger today? Unclick 'keep me signed in' box when you sign in. It solved the problem for me. #bloggerFAILChristina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-31280495174739168292011-05-25T08:28:24.961-04:002011-05-25T08:28:24.961-04:00I love the sensory details added!I love the sensory details added!Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4145236456769195141.post-82961190889904448482011-05-25T07:46:10.872-04:002011-05-25T07:46:10.872-04:00I like the new version.
It's tough editing s...I like the new version. <br /><br />It's tough editing someone else's beginning when you know nothing about setting and the character. You can see how lost we were about where the story takes place. Of course, I'm positive the writer had sensory description after this point. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com