"I know nothing in the world that has as much power as a word.
Sometimes I write one, and I look at it, until it begins to shine."
************Words. They have authority and influence.
To motivate and encourage, devastate or heal.
And in books they leave me breathless---a sheer force of beauty.
They possess the strength to transport me to another world or time or place.
I think of the best sentences I've read and cannot imagine them any other way. They would merely lose their impact.
Jandy Nelson could have written it this way: My heart beats wildly again, ready to burst through my chest.
Instead, she wrote it this way: The flower is blooming again in my chest, this time three seconds from bud to showstopper.
Or a sentence from THE NEAR WITCH.
Victoria Schwab could have said it this way: The wind gusts in the dark night, the windows shuddering and squeaking.
Instead, she wrote: Outside, the night is still and streaked with silver threads of light, and the wind is breathing against the glass, a wobbling hum that causes the old wooden frame to groan.
See what I mean? MAGIC!
YOUR words--the way you write them--are unlike any others. So choose them carefully. Make them yours. Make them SHINE.
Hello diction, my old friend.
You have the best posts and photos. Sigh. I have the sudden urge to go and write.
That first picture is one of the best I've ever seen.
So inspiring! Thank you for sharing :)
Christine, I did too, immediately after writing this! Thanks!
Now I just want to get off of this electronic box and go read!
What an awesome picture. I now I have a huge desire to go edit.
Sigh! I'll never write like that. :(
Love the pictures!!!
But Stina, that's what I mean. You weave your own kind of magic, girl (and I should know as your CP)!!!
The Sky is Everywhere = word magic. I love that book so much.
Word. That is all. ;)
Sigh. Looking at sentences like that can be discouraging when writing a first draft. I really, really hope those writers didn't just pop those sentences out on the first draft. I'd like to think it took some effort. I hope they sweated tears and blood over 'em. ;)
Love that Emily DIckinson quote! And your example quotes are just beautiful. Yay for breathtaking words!
Something to strive for!
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