Last year, a reader of my first manuscript said that my line, "It just makes me... love you more," was over-used and corny.
And she was right.
Now I try to make romantic lines sound more original.
It got me thinking that it's the same for script lines in movies.
The top five corniest romantic lines I can think of are:
1. "Nobody puts Baby in a corner." From Dirty Dancing
2. "You had me at hello." and...
3."YOU… COMPLETE… ME." Both from Jerry McGuire.
4.“I love you.” “Ditto.” From Ghost.
5. and "Swoon. I'll catch you." From The English Patient.
HAVE YOU WRITTEN A CORNY LINE OR, CAN YOU ADD ANYTHING TO MY LIST?
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